ตัวอย่างการตรวจ English Proofreading (Sample#13)

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Lymphatic filariasis, commonly known as elephantiasis, is a neglected tropical disease. It is caused by infection with nematodes (roundworms) of the family Filariodidea. There are three types of these filarial worms.

An often forgotten and marginalized tropical disease, Lymphatic filariasis, which is more commonly termed elephantiasis, is a disease resulting from infection by nematodes, a kind of roundworm and member of the family Filariodidea. Diseases are caused by various types of these filarial worms with thread-like bodies, with three being the most prominent.

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