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Due to its relating easy cultivation, the reliable flowering of many big, beautiful blossoms that will keep fresh for a long time and in vitro mass propagation, it is one of the orchids commonly available in flower shapes, stores, and garden centers.

It is one of the orchids commonly available in flower shops, stores and garden centers, easy to cultivate with reliable flowering of many big, beautiful blossoms that keep fresh for a long time.

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